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Paper I folded
From paper it came
There it was with beautiful plumage
With colors I could not name

I took it from my teacher's hand
And quickly I ran away
To where the bird could fly in open air
And I could watch it if I may

From paper it had been born
But to me it was alive
And to see it fly free
Was my goal to strive

It left my hand
The bird, it I threw
But it fell limply to the ground
This was new!

I stared at it dumb
Why it should swimming in the sky
But it lay on the ground and I yelled
"What bird cannot fly!"

A person who walked past
Had heard my loud cry
And picked the bird up and said
"It is the bird with clipped wings who cannot fly."
©2006-2010 ~Flute25
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I made a paper bird today, it couldn't fly.

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:iconkuroi-nekochan:
Damn. That's awesome.

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"Religions are philosophies with some good ideas and some f**king weird ones."
~Eddie Izzard
:iconflute25:
Thanks! (^.^)

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Haku Lives!
:iconkuroi-nekochan:
You're very welcome! Yes dammit, Haku still lives! YAAY!

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"Religions are philosophies with some good ideas and some f**king weird ones."
~Eddie Izzard
:iconflute25:
Yes he does! Good to see someone who still has faith. (^.^)
Thanks again for the comment. (^.^)

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Haku Lives!
:iconboshaft:
Very good poem, I kinda find it humorous because...that's what you would really do (sigh) :no:
:iconflute25:
How shalt I punish ye? Ah yes. Say farewell to your Aku plushie! *Takes Plushie*

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Haku Lives!
:iconflute25:
Oh. And thanks for the fav.

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Haku Lives!
:iconboshaft:
HA! You MAY be able to take the AKU plushie way...BUT you'll NEVER take my PICCOLO plushie! So jokes on you!:mwahaha:
:iconboshaft:
Your welcome...errr just ignore that last comment...:movingon:

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